Hi, nice Voki :) It was well organized the only thing that you should focus on is where you use punctuation marks, you should stop to take a breath so your listeners could understand when you finish a sentence and go on to the next one. Keep up the good work.
hi hasan,your speech is well but it isn't a bit clear.I couldn't find any grammatical mistakes.You should say /ɪˈspɛʃ(ə)li/ instead of /eˈspɛʃ(ə)li/.Thanks...
hi hasan..be careful about pronunciation of ''western''..ı couldnt see any grammatical mistake..good job
ReplyDeletehi hasan..i like your speech..i couldn't catch any mistake..
ReplyDeleteHasan, i like the way you speak.. nice one...
ReplyDeleteHi, nice Voki :) It was well organized the only thing that you should focus on is where you use punctuation marks, you should stop to take a breath so your listeners could understand when you finish a sentence and go on to the next one. Keep up the good work.
ReplyDeletehi hasan,your speech is well but it isn't a bit clear.I couldn't find any grammatical mistakes.You should say /ɪˈspɛʃ(ə)li/ instead of /eˈspɛʃ(ə)li/.Thanks...
ReplyDeletegood job except for some pronounciation mistakes and disinformation about ur football aptitude:P well done hoca! :D
ReplyDeleteı didnt find any grammatical mistake. good job
ReplyDeleteyour speech is good well done
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