hi neval.i think your speech is good.ı couldn't catch any mistakes.actually there is one but it's about the date(after six days-8th).you said it because of the flowing of your speech.you didn't pay attention on that issue.
hi neval, it is nice to see you in your wedding dress:) i think you'd better practicing on grammar because there are a few significant mistakes, you should use perfective tense instead of progressive tense. anyway it was a good ceremony:) congraculations:)
Hi Neval, your speech is very clear, you must have worked hard to synchronize your photos and speech, they are very well organized =) I really liked watching your speech.
hi neval.i think your speech is good.ı couldn't catch any mistakes.actually there is one but it's about the date(after six days-8th).you said it because of the flowing of your speech.you didn't pay attention on that issue.
ReplyDeletehi hasret,you are right on that issue.I should have to say after 5 days.I didn't calculate exactly :) thank you for your comment.
ReplyDeletehi neval, it is nice to see you in your wedding dress:) i think you'd better practicing on grammar because there are a few significant mistakes, you should use perfective tense instead of progressive tense. anyway it was a good ceremony:) congraculations:)
ReplyDeleteHi Neval, your speech is very clear, you must have worked hard to synchronize your photos and speech, they are very well organized =) I really liked watching your speech.
ReplyDeletehi neval it was a good speech.Your pronounciation was good and easy to catch.Good job :)
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