hi cansu.i like your speech..
hi cansu..there were some pronunciational mistakes such as retired..you should use graduated from ,not graduated at..ı liked your speech.good job
hi cansu,I agree with derya about your mistake.In addition,you should pay attention to hesitations.thanks...
hi cansu your speech is not bad but there are some mistakes. you can correct them. thanks
apart from your grammatical mistakes your speech was good.good job .
good job it is a good speech
hi cansu.i like your speech..
ReplyDeletehi cansu..there were some pronunciational mistakes such as retired..you should use graduated from ,not graduated at..ı liked your speech.good job
ReplyDeletehi cansu,I agree with derya about your mistake.In addition,you should pay attention to hesitations.thanks...
ReplyDeletehi cansu your speech is not bad but there are some mistakes. you can correct them. thanks
ReplyDeleteapart from your grammatical mistakes your speech was good.good job .
ReplyDeletegood job it is a good speech
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