hi derya..your speech is good there isn't any grammatical mistake.Your pronunciation is also good.but i think it should be more fluent.. ıt's a little bit slow..
hi derya,I think the organization of your video is very successfull.you could adjust your speech according to your photos.you could pay attention to grammar rules and pronounciations thus I didn't find any mistakes in your speech.well done....
hi derya. ı think your film isn't slow. ıt is fairly comprehensible. ı didn't hear any mistake but there is only important point that you should record your the other presentations in a silent place. :)
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ReplyDeletehi derya..your speech is good there isn't any grammatical mistake.Your pronunciation is also good.but i think it should be more fluent.. ıt's a little bit slow..
ReplyDeletehi derya,I think the organization of your video is very successfull.you could adjust your speech according to your photos.you could pay attention to grammar rules and pronounciations thus I didn't find any mistakes in your speech.well done....
ReplyDeleteit was a dramatic memory, so i think it is ok. the slow music and the slow speech. although it is a bad memeory, it has been a good speech.
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ReplyDeleteHi Derya, your speech is well organized and comprehensible. There is not any mistake in your speech.
ReplyDeletehi derya. ı think your film isn't slow. ıt is fairly comprehensible. ı didn't hear any mistake but there is only important point that you should record your the other presentations in a silent place. :)
ReplyDeletehi derya i've liked ur work .Good job!! .Organization of your speech so good .It was clear and fluent
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