hi gamze..your speech is a little bit unclear.it's hard to hear what you say but ı tried to listen it carefully.your speech is very short.you could prolong it by adding few sentences for examples by your thoughts or feelings.
hi gamze,your video is short and your speech is unclear.I agree with Hasret.Also,you should have introduced your topic at the beginning of your speech.For example,I didn't understand 'it' which was your first word.
Hi Gamze, it is a short story but you could have added introduction and conclusion parts into your speech by emphasizing your thought about story or you could have said what your message was in this story.
hi gamze..your speech is a little bit unclear.it's hard to hear what you say but ı tried to listen it carefully.your speech is very short.you could prolong it by adding few sentences for examples by your thoughts or feelings.
ReplyDeletehi gamze,your video is short and your speech is unclear.I agree with Hasret.Also,you should have introduced your topic at the beginning of your speech.For example,I didn't understand 'it' which was your first word.
ReplyDeleteHi Gamze, it is a short story but you could have added introduction and conclusion parts into your speech by emphasizing your thought about story or you could have said what your message was in this story.
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