Hi Rukiye, actually your speech is well organized but I think you had problem of synchronizing your photos and your speech. There is not any pronuncitaion or grammatical mistake. Your intonation is good.
Hi rukiye,your video is good.But you can adjust your photos according to speech more regularly. I couldn't find any grammatical and pronounciation mistakes.But you should pay attention to say the word of consider.You should say /kənˈsɪdə/ instead of /konˈsɪdə/...
hi rukirik.as tuğba said there is a bit synchronizing trouble in your film and ı awared that at the end of the sentences you do wrong emphasize or pausing. you should pay attention it. there isn't important mistake.
hi rukiye..thank you for your speech.ıt was good but not well-organized.you just told us the events.there is no introduction or concluding part.there should be.there is no pronunciational or grammatical mistake.
i felt really sorry about your back and not playing volleyball again, we could be a good team:)
ReplyDeleteHi Rukiye, actually your speech is well organized but I think you had problem of synchronizing your photos and your speech. There is not any pronuncitaion or grammatical mistake. Your intonation is good.
ReplyDeleteHi rukiye,your video is good.But you can adjust your photos according to speech more regularly. I couldn't find any grammatical and pronounciation mistakes.But you should pay attention to say the word of consider.You should say /kənˈsɪdə/ instead of /konˈsɪdə/...
ReplyDeletehi rukirik.as tuğba said there is a bit synchronizing trouble in your film and ı awared that at the end of the sentences you do wrong emphasize or pausing. you should pay attention it. there isn't important mistake.
ReplyDeletehi rukiye..thank you for your speech.ıt was good but not well-organized.you just told us the events.there is no introduction or concluding part.there should be.there is no pronunciational or grammatical mistake.
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