hi, aysen i like ur work .It was funny:) i couldn't catch any grammatical mistakes but there were some pronunciation mistakes EX: u should say /kənˈsiːlr/ instead of konsılır and say /mæsˈkɑː.rə/ instead of maskara good job!!
hi aysen..first of all your introduction is not very effective.because you shouldn't say directly what you will mention.please pay attention to the word'moisturizer'.
hi, aysen i like ur work .It was funny:) i couldn't catch any grammatical mistakes but there were some pronunciation mistakes EX: u should say /kənˈsiːlr/ instead of konsılır and say /mæsˈkɑː.rə/ instead of maskara good job!!
ReplyDeletehi aysen..first of all your introduction is not very effective.because you shouldn't say directly what you will mention.please pay attention to the word'moisturizer'.
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