hi dilek,you should be careful about the pronounciation of "lesson" and ,at the beginning of your speech you used "you" but at the end of your speech you used "we"..in terms of parallel construction you should be careful.you should use visual aids but ı liked your topic :)
Your speech is fluent and comprehensible dilek,u also have a good topic but could have been better with some visiual aids,well done:)
ReplyDeletehi dilek,you should be careful about the pronounciation of "lesson" and ,at the beginning of your speech you used "you" but at the end of your speech you used "we"..in terms of parallel construction you should be careful.you should use visual aids but ı liked your topic :)
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