hi yağmur,your speech maked me happy.But I think if you had prolonged your speech,it would have been more effective.Your pronounciation was good.But you made some grammar mistakes.You should have said 'I was waiting whole day' instead of 'I wait' and 'I thougt nobody loved me' instead of 'loves'....
hi yağmur,your speech maked me happy.But I think if you had prolonged your speech,it would have been more effective.Your pronounciation was good.But you made some grammar mistakes.You should have said 'I was waiting whole day' instead of 'I wait' and 'I thougt nobody loved me' instead of 'loves'....
ReplyDeleteyou have no intonations, no pauses. it is just so simple.
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