hi merve thank you for your speech.it's well-organized but it should be more fluent.sometimes you experienced some hesitations while you were speaking.you made an important mistake'you should put a some money'Ithink you shouldn't say 'a' there.
In contrast to meryem's comment there were some grammatical and pronounciation mistakes merve. A well-chosen topic and can be understood easily with these steps,good job(:
hi merve Congratulations!! cuz ur topic was critical and take big place in our life There no grammatical or pronouncitional mistakes Good Job!!
ReplyDeletehi merve thank you for your speech.it's well-organized but it should be more fluent.sometimes you experienced some hesitations while you were speaking.you made an important mistake'you should put a some money'Ithink you shouldn't say 'a' there.
ReplyDeleteIn contrast to meryem's comment there were some grammatical and pronounciation mistakes merve. A well-chosen topic and can be understood easily with these steps,good job(:
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