hi dilay.your speech is not well-organized there isn't any introduction or concluding part.you just told us the story.your pronunciation is good and there is no grammatical mistake..
Hi Dilay, I could not understand some of your words maybe your voice could be louder. Your visual support is good I mean photos made your speech more understandable. I could not find any mistake in your speech.
hi dilay.your speech is not well-organized there isn't any introduction or concluding part.you just told us the story.your pronunciation is good and there is no grammatical mistake..
ReplyDeleteHi Dilay, I could not understand some of your words maybe your voice could be louder. Your visual support is good I mean photos made your speech more understandable. I could not find any mistake in your speech.
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