hi berat,your speech is very clear.In addition,I like that you are very calm when speaking.But you had some minor mistakes.It would be more effective speech ,if you had said 'hi guys,hi everybody etc.' instead of 'yes' at the beginning of speech and 'here are the ingredients' instead of only 'ingredients'.There aren't any pronounciation mistakes except /deˈlɪʃəs/.you should have said /dɪˈlɪʃəs/.
hi berat,your speech is very clear.In addition,I like that you are very calm when speaking.But you had some minor mistakes.It would be more effective speech ,if you had said 'hi guys,hi everybody etc.' instead of 'yes' at the beginning of speech and 'here are the ingredients' instead of only 'ingredients'.There aren't any pronounciation mistakes except /deˈlɪʃəs/.you should have said /dɪˈlɪʃəs/.
ReplyDeletenice one. i'd like to say something but i guess neval has already said everything... like it =) well done
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