a well-prepared presentation, your speech was fluent but it could have been shorter.repeating some words is irritating like 'like this':) by and large,good job.
hi rukiye,you organized your speech very well.ı liked your video transition.The steps of making flying bird were very comlicating but you told clearly.it would be better, if you hadn't said 'like this' so much and you should have said 'the last step is to bend the paper...' instead of 'the last step is bend the paper...'.I couldn't catch any mistakes other than these.thank you...
a well-prepared presentation, your speech was fluent but it could have been shorter.repeating some words is irritating like 'like this':) by and large,good job.
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ReplyDeletehi rukiye,you organized your speech very well.ı liked your video transition.The steps of making flying bird were very comlicating but you told clearly.it would be better, if you hadn't said 'like this' so much and you should have said 'the last step is to bend the paper...' instead of 'the last step is bend the paper...'.I couldn't catch any mistakes other than these.thank you...
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